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Thursday, 4 June 2020

the horrors of the desert

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  1. Amazing william I love your writing maybe next time u should do more writing

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  2. grat writing I think next time you u should do more creature

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  3. good work but I think next time you u should do more creature

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    1. dylan ill do more ok its gonna get crazy if i have time

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  4. Amazing desert story but i think you should more writing

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