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Tuesday, 25 June 2019

my really unbelievable story.

In the day going through the grass the toys are getting attacked by ugly humans. Trying to beat the humans to get to the house. Firing at each other so they can try to fall back the humans then in the bloom the army toys are caring a huge block of Lego with a lot of Lego people. With huge Lego buildings  that were spawning Lego people with swords. They make it pass the front line pushing into the back yard but they had evil toys that were just Lego so the 2 line had better troops it was a long battle it was until the morning they've been battling all night until the toys got back up they had a lot of tanks so the push into the 3 line that was inside. They had like big monsters they really were strong but there were not that many. They were losing until the best science man in the word named Mr  Einstein so he upgraded the spawners that the Lego people had guns. So they had not that long of a battle so they stopped there they got 20 big tents so they stayed there for the night while they were sleeping 2 wolves attacked the night guards but they lost no troops. In the morning they started to go up the stairs they had the people of Wakanda but they were small. It took 19 days but the toys finally won they saw a gate but you don't want to know what was on the other side. There was more from Wakanda  the caption said these boys are spoiled. So Einstein had to upgrade the spawners again to make them spawn faster. So they were battling for 28 days then they broke the gate going the biggest battle pew pew boom boom bullets flying everywhere and battles everywhere. Then the toys bring out hulk hulk helps them the toys captured the house got the hostiles and they were gone.


What do you think will happen next in my story?

2 comments:

  1. it shows how long you thought about it. what happend in those 17 days?

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  2. Wow, there is so much action in your unbelievable story William. I'm really impressed with how your story develops, every time I think the end is coming, there is another plot twist. I think that what might happen next is that the lego people train some wolves to protect them from any more invasions and the humans build a spaceship and fly off to live somewhere else.

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